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Left here, forgotten
By myself, on my own,
I am lost in the silence,
Of my wounded soul...

I don't know...
How this came to be,
I am alone on the darkness!
It is my reality!

The beating of my heart,
Is the only sound
You can't leave me here alone,
Because, I know I will drown
I'm fading...
Becoming...
Less than me...

Lying, in a room
With four stark walls
And I would hit the floor,
But there is nowhere for me to fall

One door, it taunts me,
I know there is no escape
Surrender, the only option,
The one I refuse to take!

The beating of my heart,
Is the only sound
You can't leave me here alone,
Because, I know I will drown
I'm fading...
Becoming...
Less than me...

A shadow...
Of who I once was..
Like my body...
Memories have turned to dust...

Wounded...painfully...
A voice raised...in silent screaming...
And each wound makes me...
Less than me!

The beating of my heart,
Is the only sound
You can't leave me here alone,
Because, I know I will drown!
I'm fading!
Becoming!
Less than me!
But you are never with me...
And that's why you don't see...

jlp February 5, 2009
Locking your child away, with no possessions, no human contact, no bed, without anything, rather than trying to understand them, to help them, is a crime.

You hear some disturbing things when yours is the only voice.

Trust me. I know.

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
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:icongolden-leaves:
Golden-Leaves Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds like an Evanescence song... which makes it wonderful, because I love her very much.
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TheKrimzonDemon Feb 24, 2012  Professional Writer
I get that a lot. :B Im not sure WHY though.
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:icongolden-leaves:
Golden-Leaves Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just know you're poetry is beautiful and VERY emotive. :)
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TheKrimzonDemon Feb 27, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you love. :)
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RunningBear5858 Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very haunting, but still gorgeous. :heart:
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TheKrimzonDemon Feb 23, 2012  Professional Writer
:aww: :glomp:
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Brony2 Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is the way I truly felt when I 1st came here to DA
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TheKrimzonDemon Feb 23, 2012  Professional Writer
:(
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:iconbrony2:
Brony2 Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
but now i only feel like this some of the time
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TheKrimzonDemon Feb 23, 2012  Professional Writer
:hug:
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