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I don't like the world I see,
Very much at all right now,
I know it would be so different,
If I could see it through your eyes somehow
The truth is small consolation,
Because it fills me with so much doubt
I've lost my center of gravity,
I'm getting knocked all around...
(So tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
Because I don't want to believe what I feel...!
Rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I wish that you would steal them,
'Cause something needs to change(Change!)
I am falling so much faster!
So much further every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away...
(Just tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
I don't like who I am,
And I don't know who I should be,
It's like being trapped in darkness, and,
I can barely breathe
But if I could see it through your eyes,
I might feel like it's worth a chance,
To listen to your lies,
And not give truth a glance
(So tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
Because I don't want to believe what I feel...!
Rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I wish that you would steal them,
'Cause something needs to change(Change!)
I am falling so much further!
So much faster every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away...
(Just tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
My dreams...
I don't want to see them,
For what they are...
I just want to run away...
So, so, so far...
I don't like the world I see,
I don't know who I should be,
The truth is a fiction,
That's surrounding me...
So tell me, tell me lies!
Rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I wish that you would steal them,
'Cause something needs to change(Change!)
I am falling so much faster!
So much further every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I will love you so forever,
If you will cut out all my pain
I am falling so much further!
So much faster every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away...
jlp June 10, 2010-Revised December 18, 2011
Very much at all right now,
I know it would be so different,
If I could see it through your eyes somehow
The truth is small consolation,
Because it fills me with so much doubt
I've lost my center of gravity,
I'm getting knocked all around...
(So tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
Because I don't want to believe what I feel...!
Rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I wish that you would steal them,
'Cause something needs to change(Change!)
I am falling so much faster!
So much further every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away...
(Just tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
I don't like who I am,
And I don't know who I should be,
It's like being trapped in darkness, and,
I can barely breathe
But if I could see it through your eyes,
I might feel like it's worth a chance,
To listen to your lies,
And not give truth a glance
(So tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
Because I don't want to believe what I feel...!
Rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I wish that you would steal them,
'Cause something needs to change(Change!)
I am falling so much further!
So much faster every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away...
(Just tell me, tell me, tell me, tell me lies...)
My dreams...
I don't want to see them,
For what they are...
I just want to run away...
So, so, so far...
I don't like the world I see,
I don't know who I should be,
The truth is a fiction,
That's surrounding me...
So tell me, tell me lies!
Rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I wish that you would steal them,
'Cause something needs to change(Change!)
I am falling so much faster!
So much further every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away!
I will love you so forever,
If you will cut out all my pain
I am falling so much further!
So much faster every day!
So rip into my thoughts!
And take them all away...
jlp June 10, 2010-Revised December 18, 2011
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i wanna know where you are.
write how i feel? okay, this is how i feel.
i miss you. you disappoint me over and over again, but i miss you. the way things are when i'm with you is just so fantastic i can't even explain what it does to me. i feel like the world is about to collapse when you're away and when you're here i can't gather the strength to breathe.
everytime my phone goes off i want it to be you. i have written letters in my head that i would love to say but i can't. i want you to text me or call me or drop by my house just to say all these words that i keep wishing you will. i want you to play me the song i told you to write for me and i want you to see me on
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I hope it's worth it when I'm gone.
I can't even pretend things are simple anymore.
It's raining again, and with every crash of thunder, I miss you more than I can bear. I know it's not worth saying, because really nothing much is anymore, but it doesn't make it any less true.
It's eleven ten on a Friday night, and I'm sitting in the middle of the grass, watching the downpour spill off the roof. My t-shirt is clinging to my ribcage, and my hair is sticking to my face. I can feel the water running down the ridges of my spine, the backs of my hands, clumping in my eyelashes, but still, I don't move. Sometimes, when I can't stand what the world is doing anymore, I allow myself a
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these are the last things i'll say before i'm gone
If I had to give a name to what I'm feeling I would just call it disappearing. Because it's exactly like the way that you can know everything about someone one day and nothing the next. It's the quick death love has that leaves you wanting more or wanting it back in the best and worst of ways.
If I had to explain I would say this feeling is something like standing outside of your door at four in the morning, even though I know I shouldn't be here, wearing the same wrinkled clothes I had on the day before, wanting nothing more than to beg to come home, but knowing better, because following the motions isn't really the best follow throu
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I feel this is one of my strongest pieces, it flows absolutely perfectly, more now than before with a few punctuation and word changes to better reflect how it's sung, as well as the added "tell me lies" to the chorus bridge.
Often, when faced with the truth, we wish we were lied to instead.
There is a reason for that.
We don't LIKE it.
Often, when faced with the truth, we wish we were lied to instead.
There is a reason for that.
We don't LIKE it.
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I would defiantaly listen to this. Very much potential, especial as a heavy metal/ hard rock song. What was your original intention?